Commentary: A student in Florida posts a letter — with his comments and grade attached — sent to him by a former lover who wants him back.
Harsh critic?
What becomes of the broken-hearted?
Do they get letters from the one who hurt them, apologizing?
Do they then look at the letter, make comments in red all over it, grade it, send it back and, for good measure, post it on Twitter?
This is what Nick Lutz decided to do.
A student at Stetson University in Florida, Lutz received a long, occasionally rambling letter from his ex. It clearly moved him. Moved him to correct it, that is.
He began with the first page. “Too long of an introduction. Lots of repetition,” he noted. He worried about the lack of indents too.
This sentence written by his ex might be familiar to many: “you know the saying ‘you never know how much you had till it’s gone’? that’s how I feel. I took you for granted. ”
She added: “I ended up falling on my part. ”
“How? ” Lutz wrote in red in response.
